Tuesday, October 7, 2008

A Street Bee Tale #7

lOve pOem

"aN aNgel's cRime" by aUdra lIllian nEwton

aN angel tantalizes me with heaven's fire,
tO covet a life just beyond my grasp.
yEars paint the path of forbidden desire,
aS his wings burn my skin.
wOe to you, forbidden aNgel,
oH blissful agony drown my cries,
eXpose my souls ravenous despair,
gRatify me with your wings afire.

http://www.1lovepoems.com/pa8.shtml

i Think the theme of this here poem is that love, passion, and desire are sometimes unberiable when the desired is watched from a distance. i Don't think that made sense... basically i Think the author can't be with his/her desired other and he/she is blaming an angel (similar to a cupid like person...). tHe author uses metaphor by blaming this "aNgel" for his or her love issues and agony.

fOr my own metaphor, i Would say that love is like a bed. wHen you're in bed alone, the bed is sometimes cool, sometimes warm. bUt when there are two people in a bed (or in a relationship) then the bed is most certainly warm and comfertable. iF the relationship is going poorly, then the two are on either sides of the bed and there is a cold gap between them.

2 comments:

Avery said...

good job ben way to analyze that poem

Matt Mulheran said...

avery, your comments suck

"No Name" by Helmets Not a Chair (from the EP Haul Ass or Nothing)