Thursday, September 18, 2008

A Street Bee Tale #3

tEntative title: aTtemtping oUr oWn mAsterpeice

dAn and i Circled around the wYman building for the third time before taking a wrong turn down 4th aVenue. a Distant, poorly mixed recording of mAiden tHerapy, one of our earliest creations (some three years old) hummed through the car speakers. iT would be ten more minutes before we'd find the parking lot nearest the studio and another fifteen before our gear would freight up the elavator towards our sound-proff room full of expensive microphones and excessive cords.

tHis was not the first time that dAn and i Had entered nElsound sTudio - dOug and mAtt had just parked in the lot accross the street and would shortly be joining us - but it was the first time dAn and i Had heived over 100 pounds of drums, guitars and amps in to the somewhat familiar living room of the studio. wAiting down at the front door had been mIchael nElson, owner of nElsound sTudio and soon to be engineer and producer of what we hoped to be our very own masterpeice: a Self financed five song ep of mAn rOck.

3 comments:

Avery said...

AhMazing! I seriously was not expecting this to be that good, considering i'm the person who gave your first post only 2 stars. This blog was beyond fantastic! It's darker and more violent

Kraus said...

I dig it B street. You mispelled proof as in sound proof I believe but I like the anticipation. You said what you were doing added words that made you get the vibe of the scene and carried on at a solid pace. My only suggestion would be to add maybe some early excitement to grab the reader assuming this is the intro paragraph maybe tell who dan is and fix the spelling error but I enjoyed reading it!
Kraus

Matt Mulheran said...

I thought it was really good Ben.

"No Name" by Helmets Not a Chair (from the EP Haul Ass or Nothing)